There is a massive gaping hole in the first story and that it the origin story of one of the minor characters Emily.
She's a tiny little girl who is always buried behind her massive trio of monitors. Who is she? There's no real detail in the first story.
But in this second chapter, I'm giving her a wild adventure to invite her into this world.
I'm trying a new method of writing. I have written an outline, I know some of the characters and how they play out. It's a much more linear narrative.
But as I continue to think (I just had a flashback idea just now) little details fill themselves in and flesh themselves out.
I'll see how writing to an outline works this time compared to letting the world unfold in a random and lumbering way. I'm also going to try 100% first-person.
She's a tiny little girl who is always buried behind her massive trio of monitors. Who is she? There's no real detail in the first story.
But in this second chapter, I'm giving her a wild adventure to invite her into this world.
I'm trying a new method of writing. I have written an outline, I know some of the characters and how they play out. It's a much more linear narrative.
But as I continue to think (I just had a flashback idea just now) little details fill themselves in and flesh themselves out.
I'll see how writing to an outline works this time compared to letting the world unfold in a random and lumbering way. I'm also going to try 100% first-person.
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